[quote=@Venku]
<Snipped quote by Hael>

Well it is finished.
[/quote]

It's pretty good. I like how you basically did the same intro as Vestec, but instead of forcing the spirits into your god in a negative fashion, he did it in a more mutually beneficial way. 

You're the anti-Vestec. So if Vestec is the devil of the RP, does that make you...Jesus?

I dunno, but you get what I mean. Good job.