@Milowan Well our barbarian berserker looks good for the most part, there are just a few things, first in your second paragraph of the bio you leave to hunt with your family then return to them slaughtered, kinda has them in two places at once. Then there is the "sovereign Beasts" does this mean that one of the three great beasts did this? or did your family worship a lesser beast of some sort? And finally you are missing a little something at the end (check the rules on first page)