[quote=@Rare] I am done with my character sheet. I am not such if it's clear of any mistakes. If you find one, tell me so I can fix it. EDIT: I also think that I should change my backstory a bit. [/quote] I like your character but there is just a few little things. Firstly, you provided a picture but didn't provide any written detail. I suppose that's fine if your character looks exactly as they do in the picture, but even then I'd like at least a line or two with details about height, size, etc. Secondly, you didn't put anything in the 'Skills and Abilities' section. Whilst you've alluded to his skills in his history, it would be nice for you to clarify and expand upon them. And thirdly, although people would have stayed in Fort Cain it was mostly evacuated by the time the horde reached Rundorm. That means that the events at the fort which you described are fine, but you might want to explain why your character didn't flee South when everyone else did. Also you said he went to the Cross Roads because 'the nearest town also was crowded by the inflected', but unless your character had only been slightly ahead of the Plague the entire time, he could have gone to Boulder Town, Titus, Minorhold or any number of small villages dotted about. So you might want to clarify why he chose the Cross Roads (e.g. He thought it would be better to get as far ahead of the horde as possible). ^I know that's looks like a lot of criticism, but really those points are very small and easily fixable. And as I said, I do like your character :)