[quote=@Vee]
[@my Lalia] I have completed my character sheet (excluding the 'opinions' section.) I was wondering if you could give me your insight on how I may make it better? :)
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Apologies for the double post, but would you mind if I made a suggestion? If you DO mind, feel free to ignore me. 

Firstly, I'd make her older, at least 20, but that's more of an 'ick' factor creeping up on me after reading her background. Not really a flaw, more of a personal preference, haha. 
I'd also say maybe try and find a different way that she got into Nixus' hands? Perhaps she was on one of her 'appointments' and was brought to the ball by a noble as arm candy? Seems a tad more plausible to me, that's all. 

I really do like her though, I think she'll be an interesting addition, perhaps a charge of one or more of the other characters. The 'baby of the family' so to speak. 

Ugh, I hate critiquing, I always feel like I'm being an ass.

[quote=@NarcissisticPotato]
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That's ok! I think I'm going to go with some sort of shadow-type monster. The parasite was a decent idea but I didn't really know how to make the addiction work with it! Is it ok for the monster to share the same physical appearance as the character?
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I'm really quite psyched to see what you come up with, comrade.