[@my Lalia][@DJAtomika][@TheMusketMan][@McHaggis]

Nah, nah you guys have nothing to worry about. Everything looks great so far. You are all responding to one another and I'm happy you all caught on to posting your flash forwarded "oh shit" moment before jumping back. I like starting things with a bang it keeps people interested as action always sells. lol 

My favorite line so far is probably  

[quote=@McHaggis]
That would be the fault of the Turian brandy, then. Ah, well. A minor issue. So long as she didn't eat or drink anything flagged as poison ([i]including[/i] the delicious, delicious swill they served at Afterlife)
[/quote]

If only because the juxtaposition of the seriousness of the mission, with the silliness of quarian drinking problems is something I find rather amusing.