I like the post :) however perhaps add this to bullet that hit's your visor.

[Quote]  The shot didn't go where Huzuni thought it would, so instead of being reflected by his sword, it hit his visor on his suit and shattered into pieces; the one thing he needed in order to actually see.  [Quote]


Because then I'll have a piece of the shattered bullet hurt Scarlet and Huzuni saves her life. Perhaps she'll call you Huzuni instead of Karate kid from now on ;) ... Maybe not though.