[@Legion02][@duck55223]

A few things to look over, and then I think we can be good to go. First, and quite possibly the most important, is the defining of what Eden actually is. I appreciate that it was left vague so as to keep from having to over-define it and possibly run into debate on whether or not it would actually work in the way you want, but at the moment I'm left wondering. Is it a true energy source, something that obeys the physical laws of the universe, and thusly is bound by the law of conservation of mass? If so, then where does new Eden come from, and how is only found on the homeworld of the Archons? The alternative, is to define it purely as magic. This would make defining it otherwise as extremely irrelevant, as nearly all of your tech would now be Magitech, and as such, probably not bound by physical laws.

Second, and with the potential to be more of an issue, is the Archons themselves. From your app, they are literally energy beings, though how they came about is mostly undefined beyond a 'when'. Are they actual ascended beings, or just some people who have had the misfortune of being transformed into new beings? On either account, I would like to at least a little explanation as to how it came about, and whether or not it is possible to be recreated.

And some other things that aren't really important that would help greatly, is to give a little more filler to the sheet in the form of providing some detail to the military, society, and tech sections so that we have a better idea as to what nation is truly like. Give some more info on the Immortal Fleet, at the moment it feels like you want us to look at them and go "Those guys are ded 'ard." but I'm not really feeling that sentiment when I read through half a paragraph of "This is they.". Build them up into that force to be reckoned with that you allude to them as, through things like what kind of people command the fleet, how the fleet was formed, engagements in the past, and how the fleet as a whole operates. Look to my own sheet and how I build up the Fractal Armada as an example if need be, but more or less give the section some life. Quality over quantity is generally the rule to follow, but if the more attention you show to something, the more the rest of us will see that it's something truly important to your nation and something to pay attention to.

Your culture section is also notoriously absent, which is not entirely your own fault as it's not in the NS template, but it's something that would be extremely helpful in gauging interactions with your nation. You don't have to go super in-depth and tell us every little detail about what life as a member of your nation is, but just a little peek into what things are like would go a long way into making your nation more than just a sheet of information and more into a living entity.

Just my own thoughts on the sheet as a whole, I find some of the concepts interesting and would like to see more done with them as a whole.