[quote=@Vanguardian]
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Hmm ok, Im fine with that, maybe give me some Ideas of what I need to revise. Constructive Criticism would be nice, considering I put a considerable amount of time into thinking about and making my app.
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The grammar and spelling of the app needs to be fix, as well as the general organization of the paragraphs. The Cthulhu idea is also not serious and needs to be axed entirely.