[@duck55223] [@Alfhedil]
I've edited the NS. As requested I tried to explain Eden a little more, expanded a little on the history, structure and command of the Immortal Fleet and updated culture (I removed religion entirely). The Ascended Archon ritual has also been explained. If there are still points that can be approved please say so. Also, I'll admit that Eden's explination is more meta-science than actual science. I hope that's not too much of a problem.