Alright I've written out the action portion of the plot- I want you guys to approve of it and add any little details or changes that you'd like to see.

People have been mysteriously disappearing from the Vale these past few months. Only to return a few days after their disappearance- with no recollection of what happened. These same people have reportedly had horrible night terrors ever since- dreams they cannot recollect when they wake. The supposed perpetrators of these kidnappings are the bandit group known as the Splitscars.

However- no one has ever seen a Splitscar enter the Vale and physically kidnap anyone. So it is rumored that someone in Vale is working for the Scars. What will the heroes do to stop this evil and protect their home, the people they love, and ultimately themselves?

This plot line will began just before the flowers bloom- when one of the heroes is kidnapped.

What do you guys think?