[quote=@Willy Vereb]
[@Alfhedil]Did you read my NS, BTW?
Does it look fine?
Technically I still need to fill in the history and I will when posting up the actual thing to the character page.
I just lost my post when trying to cut/paste this for the first time and I still didn't find the inspiration to write a background story as good as my first.
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I skimmed through it a while ago when you first posted it, but I'll give it another go over when I have a moment free.