[quote=@Bartimaeus]
Does anyone have any notes on my pertrayal of Shadda in Scion's and I's fight?
Any suggestions? Am I pertraying her alright for a small child?
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She's impressionable. Does what she's told even if it is against her better judgment. She's insecure and put off by strangers. Is shy towards things such as death and violence. I say she makes a reasonable child.