[quote=Reganza]History: Targus's father was a infiltrator for the empire, being born on ship, Targus never got to see much of the outside world. His monther died birthing him, and his father was always out on mission. So Targus spent his time exploring the large ship, where he found maps and coppied them, and adding secret pathways. He constantly played pranks on the soldiers. Learning the ins and outs if the ship, he spent alot of alone time in ducts, and airways. Then while all was peice and calm, the republic attacked his ship, everyone scrambled, Targus felt his world collapse. He passed out. When he woke he was in coruscant, under rebulic supervision. He dreaded through school and the labours task they put him through. Eventually, he was discovered force sensitive. Put through training he now learns his new abilltys[/quote] -Separatists, not Empire. -Born on ship? What ship. -Clicheeeeee, but meh. -How can you make secret pathways to a ship? -I am surprised that they were not captured... -Why when on Coruscant after requiring to be under constant supervision and school would he suddenly be put into the Jedi Order at the age of 11. Nah, join at 5 like everyone else.