Okay, I'll make a few changes when I can, but am I accepted yet? Can I move my sheet over?

*edit
Alright so I took another look at my sheet and made the changes you suggested. I took out the part where I said Loki might be the smartest man in the north and left it at the "one of" stage. 

I took out the bit where I said they were some of the deadliest killers in the world and replaced it with "extremely fierce."

I like the idea of a Vyntic invasion interrupting my civil war. Not sure midway would be the right time however, more like before the final battle or slightly earlier. That is completely up to you though.  

I added a bit about a mass mutiny in Crach's army after the "rape everything" order. (Which I still don't see as necessary, but hey you're in charge.) Also don't forget that Old Man Hafrek was pissed when Crach returned and banished him for eight years. So he was indeed punished.

So, repeated above question. Is Hafrek accepted?