[quote=@Juka Gearsworth]
[h3] Elena Crowmor - Askaran Castle [/h3]
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Hey dude, there's no such thin as Askaran Castle. We're all at Basilmeron Castle.

[quote=@Juka Gearsworth]
Coming from the village of Askaran, a village that connects commercial routes between Augur and Acarid, Elena was always fond of war, seeing battles as an art and the battlefield as a huge stage, she was daughter of a powerful family that ruled over the shipments and routes of Askaran, her life was based on a strict rule of never forgetting her family and never abdicating from her honour, Elena apsires to join the Reclaimers one day, and fought to improve her art of war, so she was worthy enough to join the group.
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Also a couple of things. Firstly Lug said you could post the character for approval, not that you could assume it was accepted without running it by him and start ICing with it.

Secondly with regards to the CS itself, where exactly did Elena see all this war that she would idolize it in such a manor. Her village is on a central trade routes between two kingdoms who are definitely not fighting. Where could she possibly have witnessed battles such that would inspire her to devote her life to the art of war.

Lastly, the Reclaimers are new. The ruler called for the groups formation at a maximum of a month before the RP starts, so there would be no "aspires to join the Reclaimers one day". She hears about it, she goes to the capitol to see if they'd have her. She wouldn't have had time to do any sort of extra training to make herself worthy of them.

Also your CS is riddles with spelling errors but that's more a personal gripe than anything. And if you've got more than one CS in a single post could you put them in hiders or use headers to separate them or something, just so it's clear where one ends and the next starts.

[@Lugubrious] Do you think you could put a list of the classes used so far and the number of people we have occupying each class in the OP of the character tab so that people creating new CSs will have an idea of what we need more of and what we have too much of?