[@Cyclone]
Spelling and Grammar - 10/10

Writing Quality - 8/10

Story Line Development - 10/10 (nice to see him moving on, getting a group around him)

Character Development - 10/10 (very subtle, I like. His realisation that others fear him, that humans are to be ruled and guided, that he is different)

Independence - Excellent!

Khookies: 13