The character looks great! Theres just a couple things about the kingdom i wiwill have to address. A kingdom smaller than navire is pretty tiny. Are you sure you'll be ok with it since the economic status is going to be not so great. I know you said nomatic tribes but that implies they move. Is it really a kindom with a patron? I mean it would be easier to state it was a village with a good military keepung it from crumbling o ovovernight.