[quote=@Lugubrious] Escre's basically trying to get Undasis to take this stance IC. Oh, and feel free to keep awarding the Liaison khookies. Being the hero of a god of Life has its perks. [/quote] [s]Liaison's Khookies will be transferred to whatever hero Escre makes next. For that last post:[/s] Oh believe me, I never intended for that post to go unkhookied: Spelling and Grammar: 10/10 Writing Quality: 10/10 Story Line Advancement: 8/10 (you tore my heart apart :( he not need to die, but I can see a wider plot line between Escre and Svei developing, so while Liaison's story line hit a dead-end (literally) the wider story just got a sudden slap to life. Good stuff - and as you say, being the Hero of the god of Life has its perks...) Character Development: 8/10 (It was a bit of an epiphanic moment when I realised that the Outsider had become more human, in some ways, than humans themselves. But then it died...and even if it comes back to life, I wonder whether these developments will remain, or whether it will be filled with a (perhaps unconscious) boiling hatred for humans) Independence: 10/10 (Fascinating way of adapting to Svei's actions) 12 Khookies