Thank you for picking my entry as one of the winning stories. I see I completely forgot to mention you could add my name to my story. I wrote 'Curiosity killed the cat'

Thanks for the feedback! I actually tried to incorporate previous feedback to use less comma's, which is probably why there are more abrupt stops. Maybe I overdid it and used too few comma's this time. I'll go over the story again to see what you saw.
A quick question though, a line break, is that when I press the enter key?