BTW did we ever settle on how connected they already are? If I remember you told me that the timeline is set up so when we begin they already have a level of awareness that something is going on, but nothing concrete. Or did this change? Also I feel like you should add a relationships section in the CS since it's kind of integral to the plot. EDIT: I don't think we agreed on the 31 thing. It was just a suggestion from me. If everyone is good 31 though then that's fine with me.