[@Cyclone]
Spelling and Grammar: 10/10 
Writing Quality: 9/10 
Story Line Advancement: 8/10 (nice, got the base for a village down, but Ialu's is slowly devolving into a side-story, perhaps you should bring him back into the present soon so that he can interact with gods and the Heroes who will no doubt arise soon)
Character Development: 10/10 (Love the way Ialu thinks and reacts to those around him, especially with the whole 'why' issue and his thoughts on others thinking they are cleverer than him)
Independence: 10/10 (You're really good at this whole lone wolf RPing xD how long do you plan to stay in the past?)

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