[quote=@Cinderella Man]
[b]History[/b]: A good chunk of Taene's life is faded out of his memory due to an ambush that was brought down on him in some forest while he was taking a break. He can only recall certain parts of his non-recent past such as being raised by his mother solely, some kind of death that really broke him apart that he doesn't know the details of, and being trained how to use his weapon properly which was one of the few basic skills he retained. As for the more recent years of his life, Taene got bundled into a small group of mercenaries as a "secret weapon" of sorts. He was put under the command of a girl far younger than him without his knowledge, who acts to motivate Taene to battle in specific ways while not letting him find out that it was a "chore" for her.
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I don't mean to be insulting or anything really I don't but it seems to me that Taene is sort of 2 dimensional. He doesn't remember his history because of some sort of unexplored attack. This seems more like an excuse not to write a history than anything else. Then his character traits include: calm, stoic, bored and lacks motivation. All those words are things I would use to describe someone who doesn't actually have a personality. The final decision belongs to [@Lugubrious] but this is my opinion.

On a completely unrelated note, where did you get your username from?