[@Lugubrious] [@Prince of Seraphs]

I appreciate both of your criticisms, as they're quite helpful and the Rationale thing is helpful because I actually didn't know how to write that section out. But as for the talk about my history, you have to realize, Taene's still a work in progress. And not only a work in progress, but a work in progress that I started writing at 3AM while I was dead tired. Most of his forms' a placeholder which will be replaced later today.

Taene's personality will likely be fleshed out a bit further, now that I've actually gotten some sleep.

Edit: Also, if you were asking me, my username comes from the Eminem song of the same name which I believe is a reference to the movie.