[quote=@Cinderella Man] As far as I read, you didn't have any other questions. The only question in your whole post as at the top. The rest was just you informing me of every reason why I was wrong. [/quote] Firstly You didn't actually answer the initial question you just told me it was new to this RP. Secondly it wasn't [i]every[/i] reason it was one issue in which you made a very understandable mistake. It wouldn't even be that hard to resolve. At the beginning have it so he does have a dragonstone but fearing that he would attract attention with it his parents refuse to teach him how to assume his dragon form. He joins the army cause among all the other reasons you listed he wants to learn how to use his dragonstone. When he becomes lost in the forest and is scared he won't be found his fear activates the dragonstone and pretty much everyone else unfolds as you've written it. It wasn't even a problem with your writing, the character, the CS, it all looks good. It was a simple misunderstanding about how the world of Fire Emblem functions. Like if someone created a character that could wield the Falchion without being of royal decent it cause problems because that is one of the rules of this particular universe. Same thing with the dragonstones. What has me worried now is that of all the things you could have done, tried to have it fixed, told me I'm wrong, refused to change it, comprise you're choice was to ignore this issue and hope it goes away. If that's how you deal with criticism then I'm seriously worried.