[quote=@Crimson Raven]
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1) His aura is rather strong. Remember, he came from 3rd generation hunters, He was trained from a very young age.  
2) I implied that he took breaks, I just didn't mention that part directly because it would mess with the flow.
3) It was rather difficult for him, I was/will mention that in later posts.
4) Something like that isn't unusual, remember that the canon test where they took down the two massive Grim happened [i]before[/i] they started at Beacon. So having that much ability is not unusual.
5)Most of the limits of any aura is not actual strength but how creatively they use it. His requires brain power, which he has.
6)His aura is very dangerous one slip up (and I will make him slip) and he could badly injure himself.
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1)My character Garen is fourth generation, trained his entire life whilst living in the wilderness outside the kingdom and actively fighting Grimm from the time he could use a weapon, not to mention a direct descendant of a living legend. He's a fucking prodigy and couldn't pull that shit off.
2)If it's flow versus believability, take believability. any time one of my characters expends a large amount of aura, they show signs of it, regardless of the flow of the scene.
3)Please show limits clearly and consistently.
4)teams of 4 students, all of which have been shown or stated to be of well above average skill or ability (except Jaune, but he's some sort of tactical genius waiting to happen)
5)Aura is a metered ability, like Mana. it recharges fairly quickly, but Ruby, from empty, takes about a minute to fully recharge (as can be determined by playing the Grimm Eclipse pre-alpha.)
6)Then why the hell would he climb to the top of the highest damned building on campus just to make an entrance? blatant and excessive showoff.

When I was originally examining the character, I had concerns about the semblance, as it is extremely specific and, frankly, TOO useful.

Now, I've got a couple other characters to reexamine.