No worries, [@OSIEIPPO].


Here’s a preliminary review, [@Themerlinhawk]
[@Sundered Echo] and [@Fallen] may have additional commentary.

Name = good. Species = good. Age = good. Gender = Good. 
Faction != Jedi Temple. Faction = Jedi Order.
Rank = Good.
Captivity status = Acceptable.

Appearance != Good. Appearance = Missing.

Race = subgroup of species. Traits described are unique to entire species. Notable Race Traits = Incorrect label.

Flaws = lacking in description and attribution to character. Otherwise within acceptable parameters.
Skills = solely related to combat. That = implausible. Jedi = trained in many skill areas.

Trakata = Minor specialization of lightsaber combat. Trakata = integrated into other lightsaber forms. 
Trakata != a full lightsaber form.
Lightsaber combat form involving multiple blades = Niman. Jar’Kai = term for wielding two weapons.
Wielding cortosis baton != common. Wielding cortosis baton = needing justification in bio.
Many others = trained in Trakata. Connections to Alat = Present?
[@Sundered Echo] = Capable of expanding on this.

End of biography = compatible only with prisoner. Rest = compatible with Jedi Rescuer. Option = worth considering?