[@Lugubrious]

Spelling and Grammar: 10/10
Writing Quality: 10/10 (you really have a way with advancing from scene to scene smoothly!)
Story Line Advancement: 10/10 (you've just established yourself as the great leader of the crusade against the Cimex (for now at least) xP and created contact between your character and all other characters ruling a domain/Order/village)
Character Development: 10/10 (so distant now T-T, HE HAD FEELINGS BEFORE! Bring them back xC)
Independence: 10/10

A tray of 20 freshly baked Khookies for you. (For full marks in a row now. Can we keep this? Find out next time...or right now on www.Heroposts.com)

Edit: Ok, turns out Heroposts is actually a website. The one I'm referring to is purely in-game.