[@Madninja324] Okay Mad, just a few things to tweak. First, can you specify how his aura is supposed to be unusual? Is it supposed to be unusually large? The sentence seems a bit unfinished on the character sheet. Edit: Liking the fact that you pointed out how he has bad control with unusually large reserves. With his fighting style, he seems to be very heavily based on a paladin type of character. With this in mind, we have a few suggestions. For Michael, his sword, is to have it turn into a handcannon rather than an smg due to your paladin motif. A paladin is based more on slow but high damage rather than fast but low damage, so a shotgun or handcannon would fit better with this theme. Also, does he dual wield Michael and Raphael when they are both in gun form? Edit: Wait, I see you answered that question. Okay. Cool. Do you still want to keep the SMG? With the Semblance, we suggest either turn it into either a buff for himself and his teammates or a sort of hardlight shield, which would create a directed forcefield rather than a protective buffer. As his aura control grows, so too would his ability to protect his team mates. In the case of the visual effects; his aura control doesn't seem like it would be good enough to create complete angel wings to encompass the area. Perhaps it could start off as feathers floating around himself and his teammates and as his control gets better it forms the wing motif. Edit: I see you updated the semblance. Makes sense, though we till think the wings might be a bit too much for his current lack of control. It might be better save for when he has better control. Other than those few things, he's a decent character with plenty of room for character growth as the roleplay progresses. Do you have a preference for which team you'd like to go on? His initials will fit either NCTR or CLRT. Edit: Whoops. Silver eyes in canon have been hinted as slightly important due to Ruby Rose having them. Might need to change them. Maybe you could go with a pale blue, or a glasz colour (which is a mix between blue, green and grey, and seem to change colour occasionally. It's a real thing too)