[quote=Spud]
Tarene lifted Mjølnir up in the air and it sparked with lightning, electric energy building up, she felt it course through her, the ends of her hair fanning out with static, her eyes briefly flashed a blinding silvery-blue shade, the pupils and whites of her eyes disappearing for a moment in the bright silvery glow and then she swung the hammer to face the Hulk, holding it steady in her grasp, the lightning shooting out towards the beast, she let out a shriek, like rolling thunder. She'd charged up enough electricity to stun the Hulk, but it was unlikely to be fatal or even leave any significant damage given the size of the beast, after all, shooting him with a fatal charge was dangerous to the civilians nearby, should they get caught in the blast. She hoped she'd charged up just enough to get the Hulks attention, or stagger him somewhat at the very least maybe she'd caught his attention enough to stop him tearing up the city.

She hadn't yet noticed Loki, as the God of Lies had moved behind where she stood, taking on the military might that, although they had good intentions, were only aggravating the beast further. The rain of bullets behind her, pummelling into the Hulk but doing virtually no damage seemed to slow to a halt.

Dwight stared at the spectacle, dumbfounded, jammed in the doorway of the cafe with other humans who were half cowering, half pushing forward to see what was happening. He'd never seen a real Asgardian warrior in action, even though she had no armour, it was an impressive sight. He was too dumbstruck to call out for her, to warn her to step away and not take on the monster, she'd been a relatively normal woman in all the time he'd known her, it was easy to forget that she possessed the power of Thor and was not a normal human. [/quote]

If you take these paragraphs out, you'll be able to port them over to the collab (Link above) may need to tweak them a bit but we've kinda got into the fight now :P

Rest looks good.