[quote=@Yojimbo] -Snip- [/quote] While most of the sheet is good, I do have a few issues. 1. Both your guns have suppressors, which most people wouldn't have been issued. While the Government did air drop a supply of suppressors after they learned that the infected were attracted to loud noises, they wouldn't have given enough for every soldier in a safe zone to have one for each weapon. 2. You have a grenade. While a grenade would be useful, it is also incredibly dangerous to use seeing as it would attract infected for miles. 3. You're a First Lieutenant, which would be a leader of a platoon, leaving the Safe Zone. If your superiors had asked you to take on this mission, then they probably wouldn't have wanted you there all that much. While this isn't really an issue, it could become one later especially considering the fact that he is rather reckless. [quote=@Blubaron45] -Snip- [/quote] Alright, this was an issue on my part. When I was first making this, I intended it to be ten years instead of two years and I obviously missed getting rid of the tens and replacing it with twos. While the sheet looks good, I'll have to say that the sheet needs to be changed so that it is two years instead of ten. I also must say that I don't like personalities that are a sentence long. [quote=@Luminosity] -Snip- [/quote] Alright, this was the same issue with Blubaron as it seems. This is once again my fault on not completely revising the dates. Other than the dates issue, I'd say everything is looking good for her.