[quote=@Genni]
Before we go any further with the story, could I just ask for feedback on what's happened so far.

Did people enjoy the last few rounds, finding them interesting and engaging? Is there anything they'd like more of or less of? Would a shower scene with the two gungirls making out naked together help at all?
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You're doing well enough. And no, a shower scene with the two gungirls making out naked together wouldn't help at all. An epic guitar battle scene between Rocksmith and the gungirl who owns the guitar, however, would help immeasurably.