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Well, I'm kinda curious as to what could be fixed up on my part anyhow; Sunday lethargy is a killer of motivation for almost everything ;w;
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Yours actually looks rather good. There isn't much that I feel needs changing: just two points. Your character is carrying too much money: I state that characters should start with no more than P$2000 (see below). Only other point I have an issue with is how the biography is only two paragraphs in length. I was kinda hoping for something with a bit more substance to it.

[b]Note to all:[/b] Money is slightly different in this role-play than in the main series games. To ensure people don't have piles of cash lying around, I've simplified how prices and such are handled. The average Poké Ball, for instance, costs P$2.