[quote=@WriterRaven]
I'm more inclined to think that motivation isn't something you gain or lose: it's something you create for yourself. But I see your point.[/quote]
Ideally, you're totally right. But that's just an ideal.

[quote=@WriterRaven]- Appearance: "a wiry build that doesn't seem to fit with her rather generous chest". I'm not sure how these coexist. You may wish to go for one or the other.
- Starter: Issue with having Speed Boost as an ability. I specify in the Sengun Pokédex that some Pokémon that normally only have one Ability (such as Pikachu or Torchic) have their Hidden Ability available. Venipede already has two abilities to choose from: Poison Point or Swarm.

Otherwise, seems decent.[/quote]

I'ma call you a boobist, but I've taken out all reference to her chest. You can use your imagination~ 
Venipede now has Poison Point. I don't really have any attachment to his hidden, was just there because of her breeding hobby. I must have skimmed over where you said that, my bad.

I'll wait for further input to consider it finalized, see what Neo, etc has to say if anything. Thanks for the notes. Lemme know if there's anything else you think of.