[@Lugubrious] 

Spelling and Grammar: 10/10
Writing Quality: 8/10
Story Line Advancement: 710 (very nice, Anju are being combatted, Invidia is at the summit, Order shall be restored to the world)
Character Development: 6/10 (Invidia definitely is developing personality once more, he has a favourite part of the day, has a distinct dislike for cold due to experience. I like)
Independence: 10/10

13 Khookies (just implementing the all-new harshness rule xP) also, Invidia should have received a 20 level boost due to the time-skip.