[quote=@Flagg] A few notes as you work on your sheet. Population is very high, as is the army numbers- I would just leave these sections blank for now, and I will put up guidelines about population soon. Your race should probably just be a human ethnic/cultural group, no reason for them to be different species. Dont worry about listing the racial traits, you can just explain some of their features in terms of their culture and ethnicity. Your unique trait should be fleshed out a bit more, with an explanation given as to why your country has superior siegecraft. Also, it seems like two traits in one, since being able to raid across rivers doesnt correlate to being good at sieges. In fact, the opposite would be likely. A primarily raiding army probably wouldn't be good at taking a fortified city. Some of the above is the result of ambiguities in the OP, which I will correct now. [/quote] Ah ok, thanks for the constructive criticism, when i have more time to work on the app I edit it.