I only notice a few small things about this character, [@CallSignCorsair].

- Talents: Why the singing? It's not mentioned anywhere else in the character sheet, and frankly, I don't feel it adds anything.
- Inventory:
- - A native of Hoenn would have a PokéNav, rather than a Pokégear.
- - Not sure why he has a Sengun map and a ponigiri kit, unless he picked them up on the way to Regala after the trip to Sengun. (Which I'm okay with as long as it's specified.)

Otherwise, this is looking good.