[quote=@WriterRaven]
[@Rae Zer]:
- Appearance: Might just be me, but I don't see a particularly significant personal item.
- Personality: "always kind to people and Pokémon despite his dislike for common trainers and their battling until they all blacked out" - I'm not sure how someone can think at both ends of this particular spectrum.
- - Same goes for the unreliable/reliable trait.
- Inventory: You only need one ponigiri kit, for the tools and recipes within. The ingredients can be restocked at any Poké Mart.
- - Suggestion: Take one kit instead of two, but give him a second package of ingredients.
- Bio: Might just be my limited knowledge on the subject, but I'm not sure how "heavy rocks" would crack the bones in the body of a reasonably well-trained individual, unless there was another source of pressure crushing them into his spine and/or ribcage.
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Ah, I thought I forgot something in the Appearance section. I'll fix the personality soon. The ponigiri kit will be fixed as well. As for the bio, I was questioning that beforehand anyway. I'll finish the problems before the day is over.