[quote=@WriterRaven]
I only notice a few small things about this character, [@CallSignCorsair].

- Talents: Why the singing? It's not mentioned anywhere else in the character sheet, and frankly, I don't feel it adds anything.
- Inventory:
- - A native of Hoenn would have a PokéNav, rather than a Pokégear.
- - Not sure why he has a Sengun map and a ponigiri kit, unless he picked them up on the way to Regala after the trip to Sengun. (Which I'm okay with as long as it's specified.)

Otherwise, this is looking good.
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Thank you for the edits! I always get confused which tech is restricted to which region. I do admit the singing was an impulse addition, but I believe I have edited it now to where it makes sense for him to have it and adds a little something to his character. If you feel otherwise, I have no real problems removing it.

Thanks again.