Let me know what I need to fix. Although, could someone clarify the ABILITIES section please? [hider=Roxana] NAME: Roxana Malvolia ALIAS: Discord's Daughter GENDER: Female RACE: Human Demigod APPEARANCE: [hider=APPEARANCE:] [img]http://www.wallsave.com/wallpapers/1280x800/anime-warrior/665847/anime-warrior-ninja-girl-black-dark-eyes-female-fire-katana-665847.jpg[/img] [/hider] DOMAIN (Portfolio): Chaos (Death (decay), Violence) Brutal deaths, and the amount of violence in which it happened, or the amount that caused it. Or if it's caused by Roxana herself i.e., killing someone herself. DOMAIN (Portfolio) DESCRIPTION/EXPLANATION: Roxana specializes in chaotic deaths, such as being buried alive, or in a chaotic battlefield, and her powers feed off of the energy it creates. She doesn't live simply for the joy of living; she lives for the joy of seeing it destroyed. It isn't just human(oid) deaths that make her ecstatic; she can kill plants by touching them with her bare skin, infecting them with disease. HISTORY: Ryva, Rival female human challenger of Viscardi was given to Vestec, who impregnated her then, returned her to Garakai. She then gave birth to Roxana. Even as a child, Roxana showed a certain kind of maliciousness that was unnatural. This made her mother wary of her, even though she might have loved her a little. As young girl, she learned to rein it in, and showed interest in blades and hand to hand combat, so she watched other young warriors and practiced by herself, eventually pitting herself against them, and learning from it. She was a quick learner. And then, when she learned all that she could, she apprenticed herself to a blacksmith and learned how to make her own weapons. PERSONALITY: Roxana isn't just chaotic in her powers and the way she fights, it's also her emotions. Moody and volatile, she has a temper that really never settles on quick or slow, it depends on the situation, who's in it, and what caused it. She's always spoiling for a little bloodshed, or a lot, but knows when it is the time, and when it’s not. ALIGNMENT: Neutral Evil MUSIC THEME: Beautiful by Creed ITEMS: Long black blade with a leather wrapped handle, twin throwing daggers, throwing needles tipped with poison from her blood (her blood makes things decay, like her touch) and thick leather armor. ABILITIES: [/hider]