[@LokiLeo789]
Quay:
Spelling and Grammar: 8/10 (Getting better! Much better than previous posts in this regard.)
Writing Quality: 7/10 (That encounter with the dragon was quite something, and your description at points was brilliant. Your writing is going places with time ;))
Story Line Advancement: 7/10 (You got to the summit, and you did it with style xP)
Character Development: 6/10 (saw a bit of the respectable prince towards the end of the post, and it was interesting how he reacted to being away from home at the beginning)
Independence: 10/10 (no level of harshness from my end can deny you this xPP)

10 Khookies for Gryffindo- uh, Quay!