[quote=@CorruptedShadow] Was my post alright? Just wanting to make sure. [/quote] Reading your reply was like having [i]clairvoyance[/i] over the battle. From motivation to the way you attacked the monster, you wrote very clear sentences for combat purposes. You're going to score a hit this time since you're clearly good at depicting this action. In the future you may need to watch out for your previous posts. You were sitting at the dock with your feet dangling so your action to attack without hesitation plunges you into the water. You'll be fine and you probably know this already, but I want to make sure that you're aware. Too late to back out now lol.