[@Themerlinhawk] Force powers: I suggest mentioning the force powers being used that beyond the basics every Jedi has as it makes it easier for referencing and eliminates any problems that might crop up. For example, from what I read it sounds like he has adv. tuminus limited to blasters and force powers, breath control (I think) and possibly two dark force powers. Ine knowledge drain and force lightning. The later a rumor. The lightsaber forms I’m rather weak at unless it’s normal lightsabers so I’m useless in that aspect. Though I could rattle Echo to help me. I agree with Ellri, a skill or two related outside combat would be good. Namely to help in the rescue and escape attempts as well as some could argue without a lightsaber he would be useless for the most part. It also gives the Sith something else to play off. Namely because I doubt the Sith will risk giving him a lightsaber to see what he’s able to do. His sociopathic fighting, how bad is that? Is it cruel or just determined, a bit more detail on that for my sake to prevent concern or at least not be surprised. [@Rtron] Rtron, space your damn paragraphs! Hard to read, so until you do that, I’ll hold my review on the bio. The rest seems alright from my standpoint.