[quote=@DarkwolfX37]
Give a summary of what's there and I'll point out any big missing things if any. Cba to read all that. :/
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A summary of out Interest Check?

[quote=@souleaterfan320]
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I placed him there because he was my only available character for that scene. He has to find out why he's there.
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Like I said, it's not my plot.