[quote=@Prince of Seraphs] There was nothing inherently wrong with Kaben's entree. It was interesting enough and worth a laugh but I didn't get the sense that she in any way read the prompt at all. I think she just saw Lug's thing about the battle with the Black Beast of Argh and ran with it. That and four fifths of her entree were almost directly copied from other works. It wasn't altogether a bad story but it failed to adhere to several aspects of the prompt so if anyone else puts forth a contest entree they are almost guaranteed come in ahead of Kaben. [/quote] To be fair, I did read the prompt, but didn't pay much attention to it, since I wasn't really going to join anyway. I just couldn't let Lugu post all on his own, and had to make something. And hey, the Black Knight was awesome. It can be taken to the nth degree and still be awesome.