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Though to be honest, Casual requirements state two paragraph minimum. 3000 characters seems a bit long for starters. I'd recommend ActRaiser to first focus on his grammar, since I find it hard to make sense of what he writes sometimes.
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Seconded. 
Act has some cool ideas, but it's hard to understand his writing at times. I can usually figure it out, but it would make it a lot easier if we could all understand him.

As far as grammar goes, Act really needs to...get his act together (Get it? GET IT?)