[quote=@Ariamis]
[@VKAllen]
I'm going to assume you're describing a historic event with the mention of Earth. While I like seeing flavored text like the one in the background section, it doesn't include any background itself. You could describe the world she comes from, what she did there, if she was a victim of a Cruxi attack, the reason she applied for the Framewerk Project, that kind of stuff.
You will either have to remove the leg boosters or replace the shoulder cannons with kinetic weapons. The Armor Type section needs to mention if the armor is Light, Medium, Heavy, or something in-between. And considering the amount of firepower you described and the speed you are implying, it's going to be either Light-Medium or Medium depending on how you choose with my earlier demand; former if you choose booster removal, and the latter if you choose kinetic weapons.
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Workin' to reconstruct!