[quote=@PhoebeCarlisle]
[@souleaterfan320]

I decided to step through the portal. *steps through the portal* It was an eerie feeling going through it. When I got through to the other side I noticed it was so much colder. *starts shivering and looks around* 
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Allow me to further clarify the post style. We only record what the character is saying and what the character is doing--so in this case, your post would just be something like (and this is just a skimpy skeleton): *decides to step through the portal, finding that it's much colder and shivering as I look around*