[url]https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jewish_views_on_sin[/url] [url]https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Christian_views_on_sin[/url] This should be enough. Also, I read your new CS; while better than the last, there are still a couple of things that need fixing. First of all, there are a few typos (for example, magic is written like this, or magick if you want to listen to Crowley) and sentences that make no sense grammatically (for which to write with?), so I suggest you proofread it. Secondly, I suggest you expand on your backstory: it's kinda flat, the only thing you said was about his summoning of an angel.