[@KoL] It may surprise you to hear that I agree 100%. A yuri story - hell, any love story really - should put more thoughts and feelings into the tale than lust and desire. A lesbian story should be a goldmine of thoughts, feelings and emotions especially, since it's against the status quo. I mean, it should be sensual and emotional, not a flaming Lolita expy. Why not feel guilt, shame, comfort, embarrassment, hope, surprise, rapture, doubt, adoration, compassion, longing and finally acceptance and passion? Why is it always 'Hey you look hot. Let's screw' ? Where the hell is all the good, raw emotion? Masculinity fading, fading... Gone. [@Vee] Hmmm. Good character. Strange layout, though. When are we expecting an OOc?