[quote]it's kinda flat[/quote]
think I can get a few suggestions? im hitting a wall atm. ive been on a slight ocd cleaning rampage and thats kinda drained me

***edit: 3:11 pm cst (gmt -6:00)

i fixed a bunch of typos (including changing magiks to magics) and made quite a few gramattical changes. let me know if you see any others, please